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| Gorgeous, you're just gorgeous, but maybe you aren't gorgeous enough | |
| By ////AndiSmith | ||||||||||
| 13 October 2007 | ||||||||||
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TITLE – is it eye-catching, relevant to story? BEGINNING – Does it hook you, lead into the story, relevance VOICE/VIEWPOINT – Does it come across well, show personality, is it right for the story, well handled? CHARACTERS & DIALOGUE – Do personalities show up; are they stereotypes; are they right for the story? USE OF ENGLISH/STYLE – Does it read well? Imaginitive use of language/ imagery/ layout, does it show 'sparkle'? Are there spelling errors/ typos/ jarring grammatical errors? DRAMA – Is there good use of action, enough tension/ conflict? EMOTION – Are we swayed by the narrator and identify our emotions with the narrator? STORYLINE/PLOT – Is it evident? Is there a beginning, middle, end? Interesting/ original? THEME – What's the underlying meaning of the story? Was it evident? Understandable? ENDING – Are loose ends tied up? Are you let down? Was it expected/ original? Andi Smith 2007
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