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| The Last Ships | |
| By Toad | ||||||||||||||
| 13 October 2007 | ||||||||||||||
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I believe that this is the first poem I ever wrote. I was probably 15 or 16. I remember writing it out of the blue when I saw an online ad for a poetry contest. I think it's on par or better than most of what I write now... I shan't edit this one, not a single comma, out of respect for my younger self, but I hope you enjoy. The houses on stilts that stand by the beach are the last ships that swept across the ocean from Europe, as the Indian watched from the shore, and saw the houses stomp onto the sand, mounted on giant mechanical legs, with rifles pointed out the windows and light from the television glowing strangely onto their world, stamping out the fish, and knocking the buffalo off their feet, as the Indian fell with them, hitting the ground hard, stirring up a dust that would not faze the house’s inhabitants, who walked on straight to the next coast not looking down to see their feet stepping on the graves.
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