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| By man_in_the_box | ||||
| 16 October 2007 | ||||
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So this was another piece of my lyrical prose (again, cheers phil), but I decided to slice it into a somewhat more "poetic" structure, if for no other reason than to please those who cannot begin to fathom something to be poetry unless it resembles a limerick or heiku. I like it less this way. Enjoy. Hordes of flesh, shaped like humans, in an ongoing torrent of small talk and unpleasantaries. What do they expect of me? These soulless bags of processed meat, mimicking humanity, faking personality. I suppress my not entirely irrational irritation; I bite my tongue until my mouth is half filled with blood that tastes like paperclips. I bite and bite until, mid-conversation, the best part of an inch of bloody muscle flops against my bottom front teeth. I gape, allowing the blood to stream down my previously pristine shirt. I gaze up at the meatman before me, as this chunk of tongue drops from the side of my open mouth and into my lap. The skin filled with meat pays no mind, just seven pounds sterling and continues, like all the others, on his way.
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