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Old Bags
By maipenrai
17 October 2007
We had lost that many
we had to use them again
those old body bags.
Amen.

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Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 17th October 2007
Liked the deliberate tricksiness of this. A little like one of those pictures where the perspective is all wrong but the picture fits together. Also, a brief, but powerful comment. 
 
Phil.

Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 18th October 2007
Thanks Phil. 
Bernie

Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 19th October 2007
Yes, that thrid line really socks it to you. Good stuff.

Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 21st October 2007
Thanks Audrie. 
Bernie

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