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Poetry
Apple in 6/8 and 12/8
By ////AndiSmith
19 October 2007
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apple

apple

apple

aple

aple

aple

crunch bite

crunch bite

crunch bite

snap off

snap off

snap off tt te

gree

ee

ee

eenn

eenn

eenn

 

   12/8

 

china bought green tea

appleapplea

appleapplea

china bought green tea

appleapplea

appleapplea

 

   6/8

 

t

t

t

t

t

t

I love smells

I love smells

I love smells

I love rose

I lose rose

I love rose

t

t

t

t

t

   -

 

   12/8

 

china bought green tea

appleapplea

appleapplea

china bought green tea

appleapplea

appleapplea

 

©Andy Smith 2005

Reviews

Written by Phil (6845 comments posted) 19th October 2007
I'm sure there are others who also read music out there who think this terribly clever. I suppose you must have enjoyed writing/composing it, but it doesn't really translate to poetry - at least for me. 
 
Phil

Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 19th October 2007
Couldn't understand what you were trying to say! Sorry!

Written by fellpony (1658 comments posted) 20th October 2007
I have read this several times and can't get it to work off the page, other than as a pattern. I doubt if it would work as performance poetry either, so I have to admit I am puzzled by it.

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