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Hominid Bastard
By Matthiasrising
19 October 2007
Totally different from my others. I don't know yet if it's better or worse.

I destroyed her forests

And consumed her children.

I thrive on derivatives of her art

And command her as a slave.

Celestial persona, always evolving;

Beaten and weary, but never giving in.

I claim to worship her god,

But blaspheme his name in her treatment.

I glean her methods of self-preservation

And pay her back in slaughter.

Celestial persona, always growing;

Trodden and weary, but never dying.

I am the societal son,

She, my natural mother.

My lifetime is spent casually killing her,

But she will always outlive me.

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Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 21st October 2007
not sure what this is about but it reads and flows well, I enjoyed the read. 
Bernie

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