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| By no1butClo | ||||||
| 19 October 2007 | ||||||
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Unfinished? If you can spare a minute, comments much appreciated! My hand falls from the side of your face, pushed by the words I was desperate to say but didn't quite understand. Your expression sinks behind a veil of noise and tears, entreaties that by their pathetic nature seek only one answer. Our eyes won't meet as I give it, but might weep as this knot comes loose.
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