Great Writing - Home > For Kids > Halloween at Spooks' Palace
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 972 guests online and 10 members online
For Children
Halloween at Spooks' Palace
By Josie
20 October 2007


I think children could decorate their classrooms (or homes) for this poem.  The beetle juice would be Ribena, the witches broomsticks would be Twiglets, but I'll leave the monster munchy pie and spiders' legs to your imagination.  I've put lots of halloween poems with voice recordings on our website:  http://www.whiteheadm.co.uk/html/halloween.htm#returnhalloween



            




            


            The Spooky King and Spooky Queen
               Thought that it would be such fun
            If they held a Halloween Party
               And invited friends to come.

            “Spooks Palace is so gloomy.
                But we’ll see what can be done,
            To make our Spooky Palace
               A place for having fun.”

            They painted giant footprints
               Which led up to their door.
             And made lots of pumpkin lanterns –
               Which was really quite a chore.

            They made ghostly little figures,
               Which floated through the air;
            And such delicious things to eat,
               Which took ages to prepare.

             “Let’s make a jug of beetle juice,
                And a monster munchy pie.
               Some little witches’ broom sticks
                 And some spiders’ legs we’ll fry.”

            The Spooky King and Spooky Queen
               Said: “Our ghosts can come and play –
             But do you think that all this partying
                Might drive our bats away?”

            The night arrived, the children came –
               Their costumes looked a treat.
             Witches, ghosts and skeletons
                Came tripping down the street.

            The party was a great success –
               They ate and drank and played.
             The ghosties seemed to come and go,
                 While the lanterns gently swayed.

            By ten o’clock they were all so tired –
                 And thanked the King and Queen.
            Then went off home quite quickly
                To dream some spooky dreams.



Copyright 2007
www.whiteheadm.co.uk

Reviews

Written by TurboWolffe (98 comments posted) 21st October 2007
Another perfect poem. It's nice to see someone interested in Halloween, you know. Too bad the full moon is on the 26th! It would have made for an interesting night! 
 
-TW
To TurboWolffe
Written by Josie (2632 comments posted) 21st October 2007
I am very pleased to have a nice review by a 14 year old because I do write for the young and it's nice to know that you like it. "Perfect" may be an exaggeration, but thanks very much.

Written by Fledermaus (3207 comments posted) 22nd October 2007
Deja lu? You have posted this before haven't you? It's still fun though :)

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

Next item