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Rabbit rabbits
By tpowell
21 October 2007
This is inspired by our baby rabbit Snuffy, who always looks cross when we put him
back in his hutch.



                                    I stare crossly out of my hutch

                                    I really don't like it much

                                    I'd rather run in the garden, free

                                    Munching flowers for my tea


                                    You can stroke me if you like

                                    I won't scratch or try to bite

                                    But don't pick me up by my ears

                                    That will only end in tears

                                   
                                    I love to hop and jump around
                                   
                                    And I hardly make a sound
                                    
                                    I love to snuffle and sniff your hair
                                    
                                    And stand up and taste the air
                                  
                                   
                                    Make sure you give me plenty of food

                                    That always improves my mood

                                    And if I can't come out to roam

                                    This hutch isn't too bad a home


                                    

Reviews

Written by audrie (451 comments posted) 21st October 2007
Any rabbit owner will love this.
We had a cat called Marmalade
Written by BedtimeStoryteller (103 comments posted) 28th October 2007
Nice one, you might just start a trend here: 
 
We had a cat called Marmalade 
'Twas the colour of her belly 
She had the weirdest appetite 
And loved her fruit and jelly 
 
But sometimes she would bring home mice 
And worse, blue tits and sparrows 
We asked the vet for his advice 
And he said 'I can't think of anything to rhyme with sparrows'

Written by tpowell (105 comments posted) 28th October 2007
Thank you Audrie and BedtimeStoryteller, I also have a dog called Toby and two gerbils called Salt and Pepper who are feeling left out, so I suppose I will have to try and write something about them too :)  
 
Tracey

Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 29th October 2007
Why don't you writre and adventure story poem about when Snuffy escaped into the wild and his adventures with wild rabbits? You might still end the story about when he was glad to come home. Children love stories, and they don't have to be true, as poets and storytellers know.

Written by tpowell (105 comments posted) 29th October 2007
Thanks Josie 
 

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