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| Burning Attraction | |
| By Larnyx | ||||||||
| 21 October 2007 | ||||||||
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This poem is targeted at teens who can relate to liking someone they dont really know and knowing theyll never get with them. a sorta common topic, and a not so good poem. cheers Larnyx Achrabeige Its as though the Earth is my tomb In my coffin I lay, every day another nail. I wait the day to see the man in black To take me to see the man I hail. All around I see others fires burn The passion of their life. But inside of me I’m extinguished Left with the ashes of my strife. My life is great, I know worse. I have family and friends whom I love. Yet it seems I’m lonely but never alone, A black hole amongst the stars above. The sun into which I stare so willingly, Don’t know its heat, but I still want to touch To feel its light amongst my face and body, But to be burnt is what I fear so much.
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