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Broken heart
By milz
23 October 2007
This is another poem that has a very sad topic yet heartwarming and good to read...enjoy reading!

A Broken Heart

Broken heart, many pieces misplaced.
Pain and sadness on my face
Words have been disappearing.
Tears still seem to be flowing.
A wondrous, shattered me,
Would still like to know painlessly,
Why you took some parts of me?
Cause pain on me… now I wear
My soul sleeps alone in tear,
Wishing you were here.
My world gets smaller seems no way to run
Making hard for me to breathe
How could you forget what we had before?
When, that's the hardest thing for me
When it's a scar written on my heart.
But I still care deeply and still it’s true.
For the truth is, I still love you.

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Sad, but Good
Written by Larnyx (6 comments posted) 26th October 2007
Just to start of I'd like to say its a really good piece. The rhythm doesnt always flow, ive found, but the rhyming seems to fit. Very sad topic, but who am i to talk. Very well done piece. Congrats. 
Cheers Larnyx

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