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What we live for
By alandavidpritchard
25 October 2007
Fluorescent-bathed,  

laughing-eyed;
 

when you sighed ...


something 
     

ignited
.
  


Inside
 

strobe lights
 

exploded.
  


When you sighed,
 

the beat-built-up

rush
 

soared
   

   and 
        

      water
             

           
falled.
  


When you sighed,
 

you left

me 

soaking.

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Written by Fledermaus (3492 comments posted) 25th October 2007
Few words, but a clear picture. Good read.

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