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Young Montague
By Fledermaus
25 October 2007
I sit upon the bridge and throw pebbles into the water. Will the old people ever learn? They say it's all Giulia's fault. She had seduced Romeo, charmed him. Some even go as far as to accuse the Capulets of applying the dark arts. Romeo was our best man, and yet... His soul is with the Lord, rather than with us.
From here I can see the main house of the Capulets. Giorgio, that idiot, yesterday went up there and smashed one of their men in the face. I don't know why. Just because they are Capulets and he was drunk I presume. Should I have been surprised that they in turn beat him up and tossed him in the Adige? Luckily he could still swim.
Today he cried vengence and his little brothers were more than happy to take it. They ran out of the house and later came back with marbles which didn't belong to them. Spoils of the Montague-Capulet war... I talked them into handing them over and wrapped the marbles in a piece of cloth.
Tonight I shall give them to Rosalina so she can give them back to her nephew... I heard Romeo fancied Rosalina before he fell in love with Giulia. Poor man. I will treat her well my friend, and I shall give her a rose in your name too, to lay on Giulia's grave. May the two of you watch over us Montagues and Capulets.

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Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 26th October 2007
It occurs to me, there may be a market for well written prose versions of Shakespeare for the secondary school market. Probably been done before. But what if you could get each play down to under a thousand words and stick them in an anthology? 
 
Shakespeare is great to watch, but can be a drag to read - a purpose for which it was never intended, I suppose. 
 
Phil
To be, or not to be?
Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 26th October 2007
Thanks Phil. 
Shakespaere of course beats any modern soap-opera. The only genre which in terms of tragedy could approach him is perhaps Bollywood (or perhaps I've just seen the good Indian films). 
It's over the top, but he gets away with it. And his humour is great. 
The first modern director/scenario-writer to beat Shakespaere is yet to be born i think.

Written by stevetroster (1398 comments posted) 26th October 2007
As Bollywood produces over 800 movies a year (2.2 per day) my guess is that you have only seen the good ones. Their version of Robin Hood Prince of Thieves with Mad Max Beyond Thunderdome spliced into the middle, was inspired!! That said, the cinematography in films like Doom and DoomII is quite incredible when compared to Hollywood movies that can take months or sometimes even years to film. 
But, how can you compare Shakey to Coronation Street?

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 27th October 2007
Hi Steve. 
Now you're commenting on my comment rather than my piece! I supose you're right, Bollywood may produce a lot of crap too, just like Hollywood. I won't compare the great and magnificent bard to Corronation Street anymore... What about Beverlyhills 90210? :p
Touché
Written by stevetroster (1398 comments posted) 28th October 2007
Dear Maus, just trying to converse in a friendly, playful and insightful way, as I find that conversing is far better than convexing, although conveying is also quite acceptable. 
 
All the best, 
Steve.  

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