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| By punchy | ||||||||
| 28 October 2007 | ||||||||
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I lived a long life before I met you , But when we began my life became true, No longer the desperate need for a reason, Wishing away every season, The moment I met you my soul was alight, The candle of life at last could ignite, The blanket that covered my fear of emotion, Had vanished into a field of devotion, You help me breath, you gave me a soul, You opened my eyes, you made me feel whole, At first the feelings I felt were too painful, A life without you would make me disabled, But now you are here and I know who you are, You've open my mind and opened my heart, I never knew love , I only knew need, Now the more that I love the less I feel greed, I've captured a feeling that I'll never let go, No matter what , it'll continue to grow.
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Have corrected that one. Thankyou x
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