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By punchy
29 October 2007
I bought a note book in Whsmiths yesterday to write my poems in and somebody had scribbled in it but the rest is fictional and very silly.



I went to the shops,

And bought a new book,
But when I got home,
And had a quick look,
Someone had scribbled,
On the very first page,
And inside I was filled,
With a typhoon of rage,
How dare they,
My book is completely defaced,
The very first page,
Cannot be replaced,
The very first page,
The very first page,
I'll say it ten times,
The very first page,
What kind of animal,
Could commit such a crime,
It wasn't just any book,
This one was mine,
If ever I meet the person that did it,
I'd knock out their teeth ,
With a bat made for cricket,
I'd pull out their eye lashes,
One at a time,
And write on their forehead,
THAT BOOK WAS MINE!
Or I'd follow them home,
And sneak in their house,
with infra red goggles,
I'd creep like a mouse,
I'd find all their books,
And get out my pen,
And scribble away,
Again and again,
Till every book,
On every book case,
And every first page,
Is completely defaced,
Then when next they're read,
Buy their dad or their mum,
That parent will shout,
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?
Then maybe just maybe,
When  buying a pen,
They'll think very hard,
Not to scribble again.


Reviews
Ooooooh!
Written by Josie (2780 comments posted) 29th October 2007
I smell Revenge with a capital RRRRR - grrrrr! I'll make sure I never cross you Paula! Oooooh! In fact, read the poem above - - it wasn't little me because I lost my pencil.

Written by stevetroster (1549 comments posted) 1st November 2007
A wonderful rant that got better the longer it went on. Almost maniacal!! 
 
All the best, 
Steve.  

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