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| Kerfuffle by Punchy and Brett | |
| By punchy | ||||
| 30 October 2007 | ||||
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I sent my friend the first verse by text and she replied with the second and so forth by the end of the day we had this long poem and this is it: Far far away on the planet Buffoon, Which was 10 squillion times as big as the moon, Lived an odd little creature an alien form, And his name was kerfuffle,kerfuffle MC spawn . Kerfuffle about to go out of his door, He picked up his brand new coat off the floor , He shouted goodbye to his dad and his mum , And they shouted back "stay clean and don't run". He put on his duffel and shuffled to school, But his alien friends shouted" that coats not cool", That's all that they said then threw jam at his head, So kerfuffles new duffel's all sticky and red. Kerfuffle went pale thoughts filled him with dread, "If that coat gets trashed then its straight to your bed", My dads gonna kill me he wanted to cry, But alien tears if you taste them you die. But all was o.k. cos he had a plan, It did involve poison and lasers and spam, Murder was never considered that bad, On the planet buffoon and kerfuffle was mad! But then he met Malcolm a friend from the start, He said "don't let anger take over your heart, Sticky jam, is so the preserve of a fool, Man its apples, you dig? that's the way to be cool ". Kerfuffle bemused, thought this dudes like my nan How can apples resolve bombardments of jam, But he held out his offering, a juicy red apple , To end once and for all this sticky jam battle . But the bandits were shocked and with a hint of a smile Said" Malcolm, kerfuffle, hang with us for a while", "No said kerfuffle, bursting their bubble, When my folks see my duffel my trouble will double". The bandits looked shame faced, surprisingly sad "The guilt lies with us, let us speak to your dad". Now the school on buffoon is a kindlier place, Since those naughty jam bandits have fallen from grace. And Malcolm was right about apples it seems, So long as there local,organic and clean, And he's name was Kerfuffle , Kerfuffle MC Spawn. end of!
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