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| The needle and the peedle | |
| By punchy | ||||||
| 30 October 2007 | ||||||
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My 4 year old came up with the title!
Why, said the Needle
To his old friend the Peedle Why are you so blunt? The Peedle replied I'm not slitty eyed And you can be pretty up front! And where exactly is your point The needle returned In fact, do you have any use? I may have no purpose I can,t join the circus But you with your sharp abuse! Hark at you Mr Peedle Are we jealous of Needle Do you want to play with my thread? Your so very unkind In fact PRICK comes to mind There's cushion, go bury your head! Ha ha your so funny That cushions my mummy And if you mention my pins, you are dead! Ahh, you're scared I suppose I could snap of your nose Then you'd be a tooth pick instead! 
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