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| Surely we had so many dreams… | |
| By tomhonnor | ||||||||||
| 31 October 2007 | ||||||||||
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Take me to the edge my friend Show me your dreams of life and liberty defined We’ll skip past time to somewhere new Escape to a once gone nearly forgotten land How have we lasted so long my friend? Lasted with out dreams or love or sense to find History has forsaken us now it seems Surely we had so many hopes, once upon a time? I’m so so old and frail my friend Not in body or mind but spirit and wasted life I’m knee deep in rusted promises to oneself Forgotten disturbance keeping me just about alive Could I go back to a childhood my friend? As children the sky was only the start of the limits The stars that shined fall still on us all A rounded life where we must keep all our dreams alive Tom Webb 11/07/2007
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