For November, our assignment for the U3A creative writing group is to write about Christmas. In previous years, I have written about Jesus' birth as described by his grandmother who was there, and Jesus' first Christmas in Egypt, told in letter form by Mary. This year I wanted to stay on the theme, but from Anna's point of view again.
I read about 25 internet sites relating to Herod's death and the star and needless to say, there were lots of discrepencies - so I chose the ones I preferred, but realise that others might not agree. My timetable has Jesus being born in 3 BC, with Herod dying in January 1BC.
I've now rewritten it to make it sound more letterlike- hopefully. I have cut out quite a bit of the scientific detail.
Nazareth
November 3
Dear Mary, Joseph and Jesus
It was so nice to get your letter, Mary, to know that you are well, settled in and enjoying your stay in Egypt. I have wanted to write to you for such a long time, but we didn’t know where you were. I will be sure to tell Zachariah about Joseph’s good luck in having access to the Alexandrian Library.
You probably will have heard from the Angel who seems to visit you quite regularly of the latest news from here. King Herod has finally died. I cannot believe that anyone will mourn his passing. He was a cruel heartless king, and killed his wife, his sons, as well as so many other innocent people.
I don’t know whether you are aware, but you might be the direct cause of some of his slaughter. I am not trying to make you feel guilty, but we have been told by friends in Bethlehem when we saw them in Jerusalem over the Passover holiday that year, that following your escape, Herod ordered the slaughter of all little boys under the age of two - in the attempt to kill the child who the Magi had said had been born in Bethlehem and would grow up to be King of the Jews.
I have heard various reports of how many children were killed - ranging from seven to thousands. But surely if God required Jesus’ safely, he would also have sent angels to the other families of little boys in Bethlehem to tell them to flee - or somehow keep their children safe. I can only think that those people disobeyed God’s warning, because to contemplate that God didn’t mind how many little boys were killed just as long as his son was safe, doesn’t seem very God-like. And I am hoping that the story is not true at all, although it would be fairly typical of Herod.
Herod was in Jericho when his sickness got worse, his body putrified and worms bred in it. He was taken to warm baths several miles away for treatment and returned when the treatment failed. He knew he was dying and planned his funeral. He summoned key men from every village, up to 70-80 miles away. His son, Antipater, was executed and Herod died five days later. Herod died in the month of Shebat after the "blood red" full lunar eclipse, surely a sign from the heavens.
The body was ceremoniously carried 23 miles from Jericho to Herodium by soldiers walking one mile daily and he was buried there. I have heard that he had a limestone sarcophagus eight feet long with ornate rosette decorations on it. Seven days of mourning followed and then a funeral feast. A further public mourning was held for patriots who had been executed during the day preceeding the eclipse.
I suppose the accomplishments he will be remembered for are the building projects including expanding the Second Jewish Temple and walls around Jerusalem.
Herod’s son, Archelaus, was crowned before Passover. We have been told that he is a brutal man too, so things around here will not be much better.
But changing the subject, although it was the Magi who first told Herod about you and caused you to flee to Egypt, Joachim and Zaccharias have been studying with other scholars about the star that they say led them to this area.
They wouldn’t have followed just any star and were specific in their quest. They were trained in an astronomical religion and knew exactly what they were looking for. In that year of Jesus’ birth, and the one preceeding it, there were numerous conjunctions involving Jupiter. Some astronomer at the time wrote this about it.
"As the sky darkened this brilliant 'double star' sank lower, the planets drawing nearer and nearer. At last, just above the horizon, they fused into one, gleaming like a great beacon over Judea to the west."
Finally, on June 17 Jupiter and Venus, the two brightest objects in the night sky except for the moon, came so close that their disks appeared to touch.
It’s now known that the the previous year, Venus and Jupiter, approached each other and almost seemed to touch. Almost ten months later, they did it again, so close that to the naked eye they merged into one "star". To astrologers this would be very significant.
The Star appeared twice - before the Magi set out and again when they arrived. Perhaps the first sighting was Jesus' conception and the second at his birth.
John, Elizabeth and Zachariah’s son, is fine and doing well. He is only three but Zachariah takes him with him each day to the Temple, and he has started already to learn to read. He seems a very bright little boy, but poor Elizabeth sees little of him.
When you do come back, I think it safer for you to live near us here in Nazareth. If you went back to Bethlehem, I cannot imagine how you would be treated. If the mothers and grandmothers of those poor slaughtered innocents somehow got wind of the fact that it was Jesus who was being sought by Herod, there is no telling what they would do to you.
Your father is keeping quite well for his age, and we both look forward to seeing you again soon.
Wish Jesus a very happy second birthday, and say that we will provide him with several presents when he returns to make up for having missed his earlier ones.
Much love
Mother
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Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 2nd November 2007 |
Not only a cruel ruler, but also a poor strategist, killing all those poeple, while letting the one he feared most escape. Hm... I see he did get "The Great" after his name. So he must have done some good things too. Liked the mention of the angel. The explanation of the 'star' was interesting, but it didn't seem too believable as something she'd write to Mary, as Mary (being raised in the temple) probably knew a lot more of such things than her mother. |
Written by Asferthecat (789 comments posted) 3rd November 2007 |
It reads more like a historical research paper than a chatty letter from mum to daughter. It's all interesting stuff but, like the bat, I think there must have been a positive side to Herod's rule or he wouldn't have been so respected. |
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3136 comments posted) 5th November 2007 |
I thougth it was a very clever idea and you have certainly done your research. I think I agree with Cat that it could have been a bit more "chatty" in delivery. In fact the juxtaposition of bits of inconsquential chatter with the awful facts would have added realilty and dramatic tension but Cat does undermine her arguement with Herod, it was fair comment that mother just gave Herod's bad side as she, with good reason, doesn't like him and wouldn't want to sing his praises. That, to me, gave the letter it's authenticity Thought provoking Jane |
Thanks BBS, AFC, and Fledermaus Written by jean.day (2196 comments posted) 5th November 2007 |
I think you are right that I should rewrite the scientific bits to sound a little more lay personish and chatty. I will do that before I submit it. But I think you are wrong Fledermaus in saying Mary would know about the star business. She had long left the temple by the time she was pregnant and it would only be after the event that the thinkers in the temple would try to piece together what all the signs and portents were and what they meant. In all the research I did, I didn't find one piece that praised Herod. I think they called him the Great - in contrast to his sons, also called Herod, who did less than he did. |
Written by johniebg (538 comments posted) 5th November 2007 |
Hi Jean Just passing through and could not resist this. I have been looking into the theology of Christianity recently and have been trying to find theology groups so I can better understand peoples utter faith in something I cannot comprehend as possibly being true. The last one I attended was for a discussion on John Humpries 'In God we Doubt'. Unfortunately I was the only one that turned up! The reason I mention this is because it is people like yourself that interest me. You have shown a very open mind in reading some of my essays. In this letter you show your true devotion. It is very informative from a theological point of view. The letter itself didn't read like a mother to a daughter, more like a tutor to a student. But it did cover some very interesting stuff, namely the star and Herod. I would love to know whether you intended this to be a factually accurate fictional letter or entirely fictional to pad out events unknown in the gospel. All the events you mention in this letter: the massacre of children and the star are only found in Matthew, the other gospels and acts only mention Herod in relation to John, and never mentioning the star. There is no historical evidence outside of Matthews gospel that the massacre even occured. There really is no historically confirmed astronomical phenomina that could explain the star of Bethlehem either. I would love to know your source for this as it sounded quite convincing. I like the idea of the letter and although most people could not read and write I guess Mary and her mother through their position in the Jewish church may have been able to (assuming the reference to this only found in Luke is accurate). Would have been cool to have some references to this fact actually in the letter. I love the way some of Pauls letters start, really setting a context (sometimes). Maybe setting the theological data in a more realistic explanation. Have you read Ann Rice's Christ the Lord: Out of Egypt? Very interesting. I wonder whether this might work better as a journal from Mary's perspective. Always good to read your theological essays Jean. I know we sit on very different sides of the fence, it is from the heart and that jumps off the page. Hope good health sits with you both.
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Thanks Johniebj Written by jean.day (2196 comments posted) 5th November 2007 |
How nice to hear from you again. When I started researching this, I really believed that there was a slaughter of the innocent children - but had never tried to have it verified. Most of my sources said that it was unlikely or Josephus would have mentioned it. But it did make me think, that if it had been true, how unfair it would have been for an all-seeing all knowing God to allow whatever number of children to be killed in order to save his son. That really hit me when I realised it. That's why I had Anna say she hoped it wasn't true. As far as the star and the story of the Magi - I really don't care if it is true or not. I suppose I believed it just because we were taught it - but the evidence for some sort of startling astronomy at that time is quite interesting. I combined sources, so can't really give you just one source of my information. I just read everything that google threw up with the words, slaughter of innocents and Herod. In my previous writing, I have assumed that Mary, and her mother were literate. I will look up the Ann Rice's book. Thanks for the reference. I probably will write something else from Mary's perspective next year - as we usually have a Christmas theme assignment, and I prefer this to talking about trees and presents. Philip got an all clear in his last CT scan, so is officially in remission. Thanks for asking. |
Written by Phil (6387 comments posted) 5th November 2007 |
Very interesting write Jean. Always good to read another perspective on an age old story. I'm not sure I was completely sold on the tone of the letter - especially the scientific parts. They seemed a little too sterile. Nonetheless, very interesting. Very pleased to hear about Philip. Take care - both of you. Phil. |
Thanks Phil Written by jean.day (2196 comments posted) 6th November 2007 |
| I agree and will change the tone to be more conversational. |
Written by Lizzy (781 comments posted) 6th November 2007 |
I agree with the others Jean, a really interesting read. The information about Herod was obviously well researched. But it does not read like a 'family' letter but well written. Good news about Philip. Lizzy |
Thanks Lizzy Written by jean.day (2196 comments posted) 6th November 2007 |
| Since you posted your comments, I have revised it so I hope it reads more letter-like. |
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