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By maipenrai
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04 November 2007 |
My Heavenly Guardian
sprinkled me with rose water
and told me I was free,
I never felt so alone. |
Written by stevetroster (1549 comments posted) 4th November 2007 | Like this one, Bernie.
Were it me, I might have used a full stop after 'told me I was free.'
Typo in yer title "My Heavenly Guardien."
All the best,
Steve. |
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 4th November 2007 | | thanks Steve |
Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 10th January 2008 | | Your real Heavenly guardian gives you your freedom, but, like a true father, never leaves you alone. I've discovered that many times and could write a book on it. | Thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 11th January 2008 | Josie for your comments.
Bernie |
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