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We Are The Ones
By LilGryphMaster
11 September 2005
I'm sorry, ladies. We're complete bastards.

Please comment.

We are the ones who speak without thinking
We are the ones who live without thought
We are the ones who are endlessly stinking
We are the ones who reap what we've wrought

If you shudder to think of who we may be
Just look out your window, it's easy to see

We are mean
We are selfish
We are terribly dumb

We are ignorant
We are foolish
And we often are wrong

We are who we are
And we're sorry to say
That we are, sadly, here to stay

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Written by tartqueen (21 comments posted) 11th September 2005
I'm not one of these people who understands much about the technical aspects of poetry. Things like unstressed feet and such are incomprehensible to me. The way I respond to poetry is emotional. I like it or I don't and i liked this! ( But to be fair to some men, it is not always true!)

Written by B.D. (82 comments posted) 31st May 2006
First of all, I LOVE the introduction! :grin But the poem is great!! Good job on the rhyming in the first 2 stanzas

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