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| Monolith exorcism | |
| By Matthiasrising | ||||
| 06 November 2007 | ||||
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A new one. This one's kinda crazy. Tell what you think. I'd like some interpretation on this one. Anything would be good. Thanks We bow to give it name. We praise to give it life. Concentric circles wrap around, Like ripples in the sand. Our prayers stir up the wind; Gritty congestion in our lungs. The pillar peers from above, An eerie smile across the stone: Sickly demon indwelling. Where has the god gone? I am the rusty nail sticking From the submissive board. The collective mindless worship Like ringing in my ears. I want to ascend to the top Of this horrid obelisk devil; Deface the beastly image Of our wanton dependence. I am just a lowly servant, Wielder of the hammer; Tongue like an earthquake, Shaking innocence below. Release the demon inside; Storm breaks up my footing. I fall into the crowd below, Jolted awake inside a tomb, Static prison walls around me. It’s all just bloody idealism, Masochistic nightmare vision: I love the way I kill my calm. Eyeless bishop proceed my way. Bless the motherfucking symphony. Musical note to crack my faith; Shake your bell to ward away my soul.
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