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By Snodlander
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08 November 2007 |
I've entered a quatrain competition:
4 lines
rhyming
no set theme
Though you’d not know if once you glanced,
I’m full of youth-fuelled energy.
Full fifty years through me have danced
But deep inside I’m twenty-three.
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Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 8th November 2007 | It has four lines, it rhymes - although energee/twenty-three is pushing it a little.
Liked the third line particularly.
Phil. |
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3362 comments posted) 8th November 2007 | How can it lose?
I suppose it begs the question just how deep.
I know how you feel,though,inside me there a teenaged girl screaming to stay in there |
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