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Poetry
In The End
By bloodange77
13 November 2007

 

I don't have an intro. to this one. Well besides that I really liked it.

If the city lights

Weren’t so bright.

You’d see me there,

Standing in the rain.

My head is down,

Shame rolling out.

Eyes cast dark,

Shadow’s light.

There is no love,

Not in this world.

There is only hate,

Drowning us all.

I’ll drown first,

You’ll follow suit.

Dreams die here,

In this day and age.

They intoxicate us,

With poison hope.

Killing us,

In the end.

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Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 14th November 2007
I suppose this called be renamed as 'The Prostitute's Lament' as that is what it conjours up for me. Very sad, such hopelessness.

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