READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1984 guests online and 5 members online
Poetry
Smile
By ericthered
12 September 2005
Too many people never look up at the sky.

 

Never questioning or wondering why.

 

To busy avoiding the dog dirt on the street.

 

Heads down and dragging their feet.

 

Chin up and a look aloft every once in a while.

 

You see things aren't that bad really, just smile.

Reviews

Written by jean.day (2279 comments posted) 21st September 2005
I like the idea - but think maybe the scanning isn't quite right.

Written by IPFaulkner (83 comments posted) 25th May 2006
I tried - everyday I try - but then I walk in the dogshit.  
 
Nice and positive 
 
IPF

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item