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Poetry
The settlement of Britain
By Fledermaus
13 November 2007
The UK has a long history of immigration. Brythons, Picts, Romans, Gael, Angles, Saxons, Jutes, Frisians, Danes, Norwegians, Normans, Bretons, Dutch... Below I only mention a few of them...

Their ancient names forgotten

The first tribe made tools of stone

They erected standing rocks

Memories in rock alone

 

With chariot, sword and spear

The second tribe came to land

The Celts gave Britain her name

Woad, bleached hair, warrior band

 

From their far off capital

The third tribe conquered it all

The whole wide world at their feet

Until their Empire's fall

 

From accross the Irish sea

The fourth tribe conducted raids

And then colonized the north

Ancestors of Scotland's greats

 

Saex and battle-axe in hand

The fifth tribe, Germany's sons

Mercenaries turned kings

The Angles, Jutes and Saxons

 

Great longships crossed the grey waves

The sixth tribe are the Vikings

Danes and Norwegians alike

Of whom the Nordic skald sings

 

From the shores of northern France

The seventh tribe claimed England

And at Hastings they triumphed

England's rule in Norman hand

 

Britannia conquered all

The eighth tribe from everywhere

Legacy of empire

They all chose to live over there

Reviews

Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 14th November 2007
I didn't think this was one of your best poems Fledermaus. It went on too long as a list with no story attached. I think myself that it would have been better if you had concentrated on a story of an individual conquest rather than the list. Sorry, but I'm being honest. ha ha.

Written by audrie (444 comments posted) 14th November 2007
It may not be great poetry but it is so true. We are still being swamped with outsiders. Some very welcome. Some who only come for the money and theft. 
 
The trouble with being a country that everyone wants to invade, is that we are in danger of losing our history, our character, our religion. This doesn't seem like my country any more, not one I recognise, at least.  
 
It is good to bring it to our attention. Well done, Fledermaus. I think I feel a poem coming on!!

Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 14th November 2007
Thanks Josie and Audrie. 
On rereading it I agree with you. It's rather bad poetry. That's probably what comes from posting it late at night while one was actually trying to write prose... 
 
I do think that a lot of Britains charm is exactly the way it absorbs different cultures. What is typically British? Tea (China)? Umbrellas (Middle East)? Sports like hockey, polo and cricket (from Central Asia)? Lager (Germany)? Tartans (Celtic, but not specifically British)? Bagpipes (Middle East)? 
 
The funny thing with Britain is that not only nearly everyone descents from imigrants, but also that (because it's an island) it's pretty clear as to when they arrived. Today those who may consider themselves 'native' British nearly all have Gaelic, Anglo-Saxon, Viking or Norman names... So within a few hundred years al, bin, -singh and -ram will probably belong to the same list of affixes as mac, -sen, -son and fitz-... 
 

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