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See those distant stars . . . ?
By williamwaldock
14 November 2007
A little poem to start the day . . .



See Those Distant Stars . . . ?





See those distant stars . . . ?
That is what we are.
A hologram in which each part
Retains an image of the start
Alongside which exists the End,
The road to God and Art.

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Written by Phil (6845 comments posted) 15th November 2007
I wondered why this hadn't had any reviews.  
 
Almost like a homily in ditty form - and I quite liked the first five lines. The last line didn't work for me. 
 
Phil

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