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| Spanish Moss | |
| By bwoz | ||||||||
| 16 November 2007 | ||||||||
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Aunt Liona said “when that Spanish moss sway in the dead-calm air like that it mean the Lord calling someone home”. She rose from her porch rocker and went in to the kitchen. I stayed on the porch with Gran-ma, held her hand, watched for the moss to move. Tall weeds tapped against the nailed-shut bedroom window, so weather stained and cob webbed and greasy with age. “Thistles! Thistles!” Gran-ma’s raspy words were whispers at first, then filled the dead-calm of my own thoughts. Her mouth trembled for more words to say; her watery eyes, still clear and starlit, gazed across the years. She drifted back just then, to the tilled rows of new fields where her girl-self flew kites. No cobwebs out there. She smiled and let out more twine. I forgot to mention, this is a revised version of a previous posting from last February, it was called "Homebound". There were some good comments that prompted this version. Hopefully more better, yes? thanks BW
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