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Multicultural land
By Fledermaus
17 November 2007
Those who think multiculturalism is impossible might perhaps find Surinam a very interesting country. Whites, native Americans, blacks, Asians... Protestants, Catholics, Jews, Muslims and Hindus... They all live side by side in peace and are proud of their own little country. 

Oh, small nation on the Atlantic coast

Tropical wind blows over your green fields

Where mosque and church stand side by side

All colours of the rainbow are present

From white, via yellow, red and brown to black

There where the spirits howl at night

We may perhaps find and example

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Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 17th November 2007
Perhaps, perhaps not. Dogged by civil war and dictatorship in its recent history and according to a few net sources, including the BBC, different cultures keep themselves to themselves at all but the elite level. 
 
I don't think a multicultural society is needed for different peoples to live side by side peacefully and producively. Just a little understanding and mutual respect. In the case of Suriname, its history dictates its cultural mixes. In the UK, the dominant culture is slowly being dismantled by the state and replaced with law. 
 
However, if it's as good as you say, I take it back! 
 
Phil

Written by gutterkitty (362 comments posted) 17th November 2007
A bit too idyllic for my liking. I don't think any country can claim to have complete peace between the races and religions. Also found the rainbow metaphor clichéd. Sorry.

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 17th November 2007
Hi Phil. 
I haven't been there myself, but I have family over there and some of my friends come from Surinam too. Some people perhaps stick to their own group, but for what I heard they do get along well and many Surinamese are of mixed descent. 
 
Surinamese food is perhaps the best example of multiculturalism: It has borrowed from all those cultures. 
 
The dictature was a typically South American junta. It did try to set up the natives against the Maroons, but I don't think they had much success in doing so. It wasn't based on ethnicity, but because the rebels mainly got their support from Maroon villages, the junta mainly attacked those. Yet that war was very local and it ended about a decade ago. 
 
The country has its problems: Corruption, poverty, drug-trade etc... But not much violence between the many different groups I think (and that while everyone owns a gun over there).

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 17th November 2007
Thanks gutterkitty.  
Hm... Thinking about the criticism Phil offered, I think there's some point in that. People might favour their own ethnic groups, so that could be considered some sort of racism too, but the thing is: Most of them are first and foremost Surinamese and only then Creole, Maroon, Hindustani, Javanese, Chinese etc...

Written by wt (137 comments posted) 17th November 2007
Fledermauss  
Can you not sense the mouse 
That in war scavenges 
And compromises the House 
 
Ethnic tension is rife 
And with a petty knife 
You only have to blame  
The Lord of the Manor 
 
Think not, only feel 
That on the island you speak of 
The English may speak 
But the Yank has his piece of 
 
Harmony no 
Only the devide 
Phil can Explain 
There's no where to hide 
 
Life is a battle  
And you surely know 
You brought up the subject 
Who has to Go? 
 

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 17th November 2007
Thanks wt. 
I did not write about England here ;) Rather about a country which I think did better in that respect than most European countries or even the USA. 
Again, the dictature and civil war had nothing to do with ehtnicity: Soldiers took power and shot their political opponents (irrespective of colour). Some people (who are nearly as controversial as the dictator himself) resisted and fought a guerilla war from the jungle.  
Whatever problems Surinam has seem to have to do with corruption, drug-trafficking, poverty and a lack of medicines and equipment rather than with ethnic tensions. 
 
Perhaps my friends and family are at what Phil referred to as 'elite level', but they seem to make friends with people from different groups easily. 
 
As for England: It seems to me they still did a better job than the Netherlands...

Written by wt (137 comments posted) 18th November 2007
Fledermauss 
 
The Maroons would surely tell you 
That slaves and locals alike 
Did the Dutch leave to ponder 
Were certainly ethnic in strife 
 
As for the loss of a colony 
I'm certain your friends would say 
For the Brits and the Yanks around the corner  
Today is most truly the day 
 
And where the boxite is really quite ample 
As are the oil and the gold 
Surely the've only yet sampled 
In with the new and out with the old 
 
 

Written by punchy (372 comments posted) 18th November 2007
If only us brits could learn some tolerance, we are surrounded with racism and narrow minded bigots, even members of my own family rant on about immigrants and it sickens me to the stomach. I love your poem even if it only gives us a sense of hope at least. If only more poets and writers could stand up for justice and multiculturalism.good for you Fledermaus :grin
Hi Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2196 comments posted) 18th November 2007
I liked your poem too, and found hope in it.

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 19th November 2007
Thanks punchy and Jean. :-)

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