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THERE'S AN ANGEL
By JohnnyD
18 November 2007
I wish to thank one and all for their loving prayers and good wishes for my Mamman, who was suffering with cancer. Yes, I was broken completely last year but I wish to share with you all that my Mamman has fought with bravado the dreaded disease and is completely cured now. I am thankful to Greatwriting community for being so encouraging and pray for my Mamman's health.

THANK YOU ONE & ALL FOR ALL YOUR PRAYERS & WISHES!


THERE’S AN ANGEL

 

When the chips are down

The goings rough

Individuals break down

To curse their fate

 

Not knowing what to do next

Feeling all alone

Individuals sulk in solitude

Knowing well, even his shadow has deserted too!

 

Lifting up his low morale

Showing him number of open doors

All these while

An invisible angel assists him

 

With the chips all down

Individuals live in complete darkness

Far away from the world

In the big, small world

 

The angel treads swiftly

Showing the trickle of light

Brightening his dark world

A will to live enlivens the individual

 

Overcoming obstacles with new confidence

Life starts to roll once again

With the will to strive

The individual excels with a new vigour

 

Smile takes over the frowns

As failures turn steadily into success

The angel moves aside

As individuals walk again in lost pride

 

To thank the invisible angel

There are a very few individuals

Maybe difficult but it’s true

There’s an angel always by your side

      Johnny D    17th November 2007  

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Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 18th November 2007
What wonderful news Johnny for I know what a long hard battle this brave little woman has fought. There definitely is an angel always by your side if you open your eyes - and I have met that presence when I was at death's door some years back. They may not always be able to save you, but they are there to care, for certain. Please pass on our good wishes to her and tell her that we are pleased to know of her recovery.

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