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Did someone call?
By punchy
22 November 2007
                                                                


























                                                                                                    















                                                                                        

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3133 comments posted) 23rd November 2007
What it lacks in laugh out loud gags it makes up for in brevity.
thankyou bottleblondesurfer
Written by punchy (372 comments posted) 23rd November 2007
Thankyou for reviewing my sketch and thankyou for teaching me the word "brevity"!  
My husband didn't get my script he was infact concerned about my sanity. :sigh

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 23rd November 2007
Heheheh... Clever. although it's nearly poetry.

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3133 comments posted) 24th November 2007
"Nearly poetry" ? 
Blimey, Fledermaus, it's not that bad!!

Written by Livinginanattic (454 comments posted) 25th November 2007
This reminds me of those minimalist paintings which are nothing but blank sheets of white canvass. Or maybe there's something wrong with my browser?
livingintheattic
Written by punchy (372 comments posted) 25th November 2007
Thankyou for your review I know what you mean but I quite like those minimal blank canvasses. I know one shouldn't laugh at ones own jokes but for some reason I find my idea rather funny but I often find things funny that aren't. :?

Written by Levi (31 comments posted) 30th November 2007
Has anyone seen The Simpsons episode with the line: 
 
"It sounds like she's strangling a cat with a baby." 
"You're supposed to be listening to the notes she's NOT playing." 
"I can do that at home." 
 
Or know of that 4-minute piano piece which is a hundred and something bars of silence...? 
 
I've never seen it done with literature before... except for that "Adam had'em" poem, of course.  
Hey, do I win a fiver for writing the longest review in proportion to the material? :p

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