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| Outside the Gates of Sultan (revised) | |
| By CarlHalling | ||||||||||||||||||
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Revising the experiment. Introduction "Outside the Gates of Sultan" was originally published as "A Dandy in the Land of Blue Denim 3" at the Blogster.com website on the 30th April 2006. It was re-published with corrections and a new title at the Faithwriters.com website in August 2007, before a final draft was prepared in November. The Siege of La Rochelle I think it was a matter of weeks after returning from the Ocean Youth Club trip to the Baltic in the summer of 1975 that I sailed with the RNR to La Rochelle on the Atlantic coast of France. La Rochelle was the French city that adopted Reformist ideas during the Renaissance, and so became the unoffical capital of Protestant France, that is, from the year of the Edict of Nantes (1568). The latter, issued by Henri IV, accorded Huguenots certain rights until 1627, when a British-aided Protestant uprising resulted in the Siege of la Rochelle, during which Cardinal Richelieu blockaded the city for 14 months. Following the revocation of the Edict of Nantes by Louis XIV in 1685, some 200.000 Huguenots migrated during what has become known as Le Refuge. Among the destinations of the Huguenot diaspora were North America, notably New York and South Carolina, Great Britain and Ulster, Germany, Dutch South Africa and the Netherlands. London became a key Huguenot centre. In South Carolina they rapidly integrated into the dominant Anglo-American culture. My best RNR friend Colin, now a Chief Petty Officer, phoned me only a few years ago from his east London home to remind me of one memorable evening we spent in La Rochelle in the summer of 1975. There, in a dingy dive we fell in with some wild locals led by a Romany-like guitar player called Ramon, whose pretty blonde girlfriend spoke to me protectively possibly fearing that as military men Colin and I might be in some imminent physical danger. However, on the way back to our ship from a night club in the early hours of the morning we were set upon not by local thugs but a pack of mangy looking stray dogs, and it was Colin who somehow persuaded them to back off. It may be that I owe that lovable east London sailor my life. The Pool of London Soon after returning to London, I was with the RNR again, this time in the Pool of London, subject of a famous British crime film directed by Basil Dearden in 1951 and referring to that stretch of the Thames lying between London Bridge and Rotherhithe. In order to reach my ship, I was forced to take a motor launch with a group of other seamen, one of whom, a strikingly handsome blond sailor of about 30 I knew only by sight, had taken unofficial charge. Once we were all safely aboard, it was the turn of our leader to join us, but as he stepped off the launch, he somehow lost his footing and slipped into the Thames beneath him. Within a matter of minutes his heavy clothing and boots, helped by a truly ferocious current, had dragged him beneath the river's surface and he was lost. What a waste. This man was truly remarkable in terms of looks and personality; and now he was gone forever in consequence of a single momentary lapse of concentration. How fragile a thing is life. Soon after returning to London, I told my mother what happened, and as she broke down in tears the enormity of the incident was brought home to me for the first time. Thinking back on it, a line from that beautiful song "How Men Are" by Aztec Camera, which was a British hit in 1988, comes to mind: "Why should it take the tears of a woman to see how men are?" A Gosport Discomaniac Later on in the year I attempted to pass what is known as the AIB or Admiralty Interview Board as a means of becoming a Supply and Secretariat officer in the Royal Navy. This involved me taking the train down to HMS Sultan, the Royal Navy's specialist training centre in Gosport, Hampshire, and spending three days attending various examinations and interviews intended to assess my potentiality as a naval officer. Today the tests consist of Maths, English, verbal and non-verbal reasoning, and general and Service knowledge, and there is a leadership task, a group discussion exercise and two interviews, and presumably little has changed since '75. On one occasion early on in the long weekend as I presume it was, as I was putting the final touches to my finery in preparation for one assignment or another, one of the would-be future officers I was sharing a dormitory with made a comment to the effect of: "Oy, mate, it's an interview board for the selection of naval officers not some flaming male fashion parade". Not my sort of man, which is to say the sort I wanted coming with me to the disco that evening to get to know some of the local . In the end two of my fellow interviewees were up the task, at least that's what I thought at first. I can recall asking one of them exactly what he was expecting out of his evening, and he muttered something placatory along the lines of: "Whatever I can get" but entirely without enthusiasm. I know now that he was uncomfortable being out so late and was anxious to return to Sultan, and sensibly so I'd say. In the event I was left alone at the club dancing with a soft-spoken local girl called Shiralee as I recall. A little later I accompanied her along a busy main leading back to Sultan, with several cars sounding their horns as I kissed her good night, only to discover that Sultan's main entrance had been locked and was now being manned by an armed guard. If the young man nervously trying to reach someone in authority within the training centre on a walkie talkie was wondering exactly what kind of person returns to base dressed to the nines after a night's disco dancing when he was supposed to be in the midst of three days of gruelling tests and interviews that were vital to his future career, then he gave no indication of it. He did however eventually make contact, and I can vaguely remember passing through an officer's mess soon afterwards and briefly engaging in some genial conversation with its occupants. Their actual opinion of me of course they kept to themselves. It may just be me, but I can't help thinking that had I returned to Sultan that night before being locked out, I might have been in with a better chance of passing the AIB, that is, as opposed to failing it, which I perhaps rather predictably did. But then again, not necessarily... London, 1974
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