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By punchy
25 November 2007
WinkWinkWinkWinkwinky
LaughingLaughingLaughingLaughingsmiley
CryCryCryCrysad
SurprisedSurprisedSurprisedSurprised or surprised

                     one of these faces is in a disguise
                      it shows an emotion which most people hide
                         if you're able to spot it you have it inside!?

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Written by wt (137 comments posted) 25th November 2007
keep smiling "punchy" 
Best 
Wt
Hello punchy!
Written by Hayfa (22 comments posted) 25th November 2007
I think people tend to hide their sad emotions, like me. So keep that smile 'from ear to ear'!!  
 
Lots of Love,  
 
Hayfa

Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 25th November 2007
The second one in the third line is faking. Nice idea, to play around with the smileys. Maybe'd be funny to use them in a story :D

Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 25th November 2007
Well spotted fled, how did you know :eek

Written by stevetroster (1549 comments posted) 25th November 2007
 
I've just swallowed all the ones on the second row and now I'm feeling really deep, man. 
 
Purple haze all in my brain 
Lately things just dont seem the same 
Actin funny, but I dont know why 
'scuse me while I kiss the sky. 
Purple haze all around 
Dont know if Im comin up or down 
Am I happy or in POETRY?  
What ever it is, this girl's put a spell on me. 
steve
Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 26th November 2007
I think you're in poetry, you're in mine anyway ;)

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