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By punchy
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25 November 2007 |
Call yourself deeper? I'm deeper by far
My depth is so deep it could swallow a star
Your deep is so shallow it sunk in my depth
And my deepness now deeper, is the deepest I bet!
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Written by Phil (6836 comments posted) 25th November 2007 | | Now that's deep. |
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 25th November 2007 | | yeah, deep is deep |
Written by wt (137 comments posted) 25th November 2007 | I'm sorry that star is as deep as you swallow
My sleep's been upset and full of deep sorrow
That deep as you get and sink as you may
The deepest you'll get is as deep as I say
If deep is the word then
Deeper than though
But swallow I don't
Star of my eye
Back to sleep if I can
In your deepest of depth
Sleep baby sleep
Come like Supernova
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Written by punchy (504 comments posted) 25th November 2007 | Ok, now let's agree I'm deeper but your a better poet?  xxx | punchy
Written by wt (137 comments posted) 25th November 2007 | you are deeper and i am no poet!
sweet dreams dear
wt
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Written by stevetroster (1588 comments posted) 25th November 2007 |
How deep is your ocean?
Let me drown in your sea
That I may discover
Just how deep you really can be. | steveroster
Written by wt (137 comments posted) 26th November 2007 | My ocean is not deep and purposely so
Wonderfully shallow and gentle and slow
How else could it rumble and tumble and roar
And make your life’s daydream visit its shore
Its child is for drowning only as such
Whose drowning eyes worship acknowlede as much
How else could it humble and nimble and spew
And bring your life’s senses way back to you
How deep I can be is only a measure
How deep that I am is merely a point
An instant a spark that takes me where you can
Measure the depth of your own soul |
Written by stevetroster (1588 comments posted) 26th November 2007 | w..
Why are you posting poetic replies to me, on punchy's work? Is there something we don't know? | Wt
Written by punchy (504 comments posted) 26th November 2007 | I'm quite happy for you to post poems on my review section but could you make sure that they are not better than mine, it makes me feel inadequate  xxx |
Written by wt (137 comments posted) 26th November 2007 | oops
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