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Canary Pink - (55 words)
By wattle
26 November 2007
wattle - no one special, just a dreamer who found an old pen.

The depth to her soul matched deep peridot eyes and passer biers turned. Her canary pink Porsche and pink-diamonded finger advertised unkept freedom.


The truck driver looked down focusing on her, eyes undressing the black lacy number covering her soft curves, almost modestly. Her hemline rose as she pressed her foot, disappearing in a tease.

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Written by rui (150 comments posted) 26th November 2007
Short and to the point, and had it not been for the words "passer biers" which took me ages to work out, sublime.
Um.. Er.. Well..
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 26th November 2007
As much as I like this Wattle, I do wonder why it was not a tad longer? 
 
Sublime? No. But a very good piece of business. 
 
Slan!

Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 26th November 2007
Wonderful to see you again Eric. What on earth have you been doing? Campaigning to get rid of HRH. Good riddance. 
 
Typically you. Taken to truck driving too? 
 
Enjoyed. 
 
Phil 
 
Proper flash fiction.

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