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| By Matthiasrising | ||
| 27 November 2007 | ||
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woo # 2 in some kind of odd series Floating about the surface, Anticipation as heavy As before sodium meets water (Elements being personified My metaphors literalized), These are possessions I’ve Bent under tragic authority, Like forcing words to speak, From inky source so meek. The two temptations Have found my place of rest, My crusty Sabbath habit. I’m coming around again, Digging and churning, Feeling for the dimples. I found the gaping puncture: A schism growing wide. Then pulling at the seams To make space for this Great engulfing stitch, I jump inside my formula. Quantum recursive Fucking Fibonacci. Massive irony heart attack Pulls it back into perspective. Two sides of a four dimensional Brewing and grinding storm Sitting on your shoulders. You and I are the same If we look into the mirror.
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