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Marsh dragon for part one.
I owe an explanation as to the low water...
This is written during a break, so a bit short... Once I've finished it I shall put it all together and perhaps move it to 'extended work'...
A few months onwards, the water level had dropped so low that one could wade through the canals. Washing clothes had nearly become impossible, for the master was smart enough to reserve rainwater for drinking only.
Yet Wieke could not do the laundry in water so murky that it would make clothes dirtier rather than cleaner. The current had become even weaker and the smell alone was enough to nearly make her vomit.
They knew what was happening. The defensive structures erected by the prince’s army were more than just that. They were dikes… What was a Marsh Dragon without a marsh?
She clenched the worn off rosary and said her prayers. Her stomach was aching, yet more than starvation she feared the troops out there in the fields.
She knew the stories from people who had lived before the ceasefire or those who fled the occupied lands. The war was terrible and had devastated the Netherlands for nearly sixty years now, only briefly interrupted by the ceasefire during which she was born. How lucky she had been, only to know the violence from hearsay…
Now every day they could hear the cannons being fired and again and again there came reports of fallen fortresses. The whole summer they had been locked up behind the walls and heard how the beast encrouched on them. Yet today it seemed closer than ever. Even here, within the walls, she could hear the war drums and the cries of the men and horses.
Maarten was up there, on the walls…
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Written by rui (150 comments posted) 27th November 2007 |
As they were in the middle of a rotting, part-drained marsh, was disease ever a problem? Especially as with dropping water level and no current, that part of the marsh must be His Master's Pee in concentration. This little bit builds the tension well. Enjoyed. |
Written by Fledermaus (3490 comments posted) 27th November 2007 |
Hi Rui, Thanks for your comment. I'm afraid here my lack of research on the event becomes a problem: I simply don't know. All I knew about it was that the protestant army dammed the rivers and as a result it was able to approach the city. I have looked up the dates and locations, but I couldn't find much more information. I supose that after months in an overcrowded, besieged city where the main sewage system is disabled there must have been both hunger and disseases, but I do not know for sure. There were such problems during the sieges of Leiden and Breda (also in the 80 years'war), so I suppose it must have been the case for 's-Hertogenbosch too, but I haven't read anything about it so far...
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Written by rui (150 comments posted) 27th November 2007 |
| In telling a story from a low servant's perspective, you can get away with glossing over the historical accuracy in favour of the human story. Only the major bits are important, no? |
Written by Fledermaus (3490 comments posted) 27th November 2007 |
Hi again Rui. I hope so... But I'll still try to stick to the facts for as far as I know them... (or at least not to oppose them filling in the gaps). |
Written by Lizzy (828 comments posted) 28th November 2007 |
Yes, it explained the water level well. I do like the idea of the servants perspective. Looking forward to more. Lizzy |
Written by Fledermaus (3490 comments posted) 28th November 2007 |
Thanks Lizzy. More will come, but I'll have to do more research first I think  |
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