If you are quite ready, we can start on this very interesting trip through Upper Wharfedale in the Yorkshire Dales. You will discover the resting place of J B Priestley and hear of a very comical mistake.
Today we start the trip from the source of the Wharfe. Briefly these are the characteristics of the landscape around us.
Upper Wharfedale is a classic u-shaped glacial valley. A lake was left behind after the glacier melted, and although that disappeared quite soon, this valley bottom is prone to flooding. You will mainly find the small road follows the river, while hills rise on either side. Listen – what do we hear? Mainly the sound of sheep on the hillsides and the gentle sound of the river as it runs over its stony bottom. Other than that you feel you are far from civilisation – something quite rare in Britain today.
Two becks (small streams) join at Beckermonds and The Wharfe starts its life at Langstrothdale, which is actually the Upper Wharfe. The little hamlet in this area is called Yockenthwaite. Visitors to Yockenthwaite can see an ancient circle of stones here or a “ring cairn” or “kerbstones”. Many names such as Yockenthwaite are Viking names and “thwaite” means a clearing or pastureland. The thirteenth-century form, Yoghannesthweit, combined the Scandinavian term thweit with the Irish name Eogan, to give Eogan’s clearing.
Following the stream, you arrive at a small place called Hubberholme – just a few cottages and The George Inn. Hubberholme was recorded in Domesday Book as Huburgheham, from the feminine name, Hunburg – the woman Hunburg’s farmstead or home. In the summer you can sit by the river and feed the many ducks who expect to share their picnic with the visitors. Were visitors made for any other purpose?
Immediately behind you is the little church of Hubberholme, dedicated to St Michael and All Angels. There is a solidness and dignity to this 12th century church with its sturdy tower and broad low roof. It is constructed of local stone and lives its life happily in its picturesque surroundings beside the River Wharfe. Here you can find a famous person’s ashes in its graveyard: J B Priestley, one of Yorkshire’s famous writers and one of Britain's much loved writers. He loved this church and wrote that it was one of the pleasantest places in the world. Write "Hubberholme, Upper Wharfedale" on Google images for pictures of this area together with pictures of the beautiful interior of the church itself - or better than that, come.
It is such a peaceful English churchyard. There is a smell of oldness and oak in this church. It has a magnificent rood loft and the hand carved oak pews were added in more recent times. They are the work of a famous British furniture maker called Robert (mousey) Thompson, (the Mouse Man of Kilburn) North Yorkshire. He always left his trade mark – a mouse – on his furniture. There are a few in Hobberholme Church and a favourite game is to hunt for them on pew ends. Even after the death of Thompson, the factory which he founded continued adding the little mouse to their fine furniture.
This small country church is one of the prettiest and much loved churches in the Dales as well as being unusual. The mediaeval feel of the church eminates from the following features: The interior walls are of unplastered, rough local stone. There is an iron candelabra overhead and a hand-painted rood loft. A rood loft is a narrow gallery which could be used by singers or musicians. This gallery, in Hubberholme Church, is finely carved in oak and painted red, black and gold and it dates from 1558. During the Reformation, many rood lofts were destroyed as a link with Roman Catholic churches, but, luckily this one survived.
A story attaches itself to this church of a very curious baptism. A child, who should have been christened Ambrose Stanley was inadvertently christened Amorous Stanley. Perhaps the vicar was thinking of something else at the time, or was a little hard of hearing. However, whatever the reason was, the family tried in vain to change the name, but the register couldn’t be altered and the unfortunate child had to live with that name in those days. In later life he had a business career in which he described himself as Amorous Stanley – licensed hawker.
Tomorrow I'll tell you of the fish that swam in the aisles of this church, and we'll cross the river for another strange story at the George Inn.
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mere nitpicking Written by fellpony (1720 comments posted) 30th November 2007 |
I enjoyed reading this, because your countryside is very similar to ours on the other side of the Pennine chain and I could visualise what you were describing, but I would suggest a few improvements in the text. For instance, there are some oddities in the vocabulary that jar (for me, anyway), eg, "start the trip from the mouth of the Wharfe" - erm, you're actually at the source and the mouth is at the other end; then there are "commence" and "oldness" and "a few years' ago" which in this case doesn't need the apostrophe (oops). And isn't the Rood the Cross itself - I think you mean "the loft" when you say "luckily this beautiful rood survived." Watch out for over-use of words like "beautiful" and "interesting". I once did a study of museum visitors' responses that used the word "interesting" and it quickly became evident from the many ways it was used that it was a vague, "cotton-wool" word that actually meant nothing precise whatsoever. I thought your description of your miraculous recovery from streptococcal infection here was actually less fine than the one you PM'ed to me not so long ago; this one read a little confusedly, so perhaps the introductory "i nearly died" could be left out as you explain the severity of the infection a little later; and in that, you could give a touch more detail for the sake of "convincing verisimilitude" The concept of travelling an actual geographical route is a well-known and useful one; if you know unusual details and write tightly and cleanly it works well. This all sounds like I'm being harsh but actually I think this is a good and interesting journey, well worthwhile polishing with a bit of attention to such points as I've mentioned. |
oops Written by fellpony (1720 comments posted) 30th November 2007 |
| I used the word "interesting" myself there. |
Back to you Fellpony Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 30th November 2007 |
| Thank you so much Sue for your help. I am really stretching myself and writing in a completely new domain with this. I've never tried travel writing before. I think that GW offers us a chance to try new kinds of writing and we should try. Rhyming poetry is what I do best I think, but this has taken me away from the poetry section for a bit. I think that what you said was right and I've changed it. Hope it sounds better. Yes, you were right about the source and mouth of the river. I do know that. You often don't see your own mistakes when you are busy typing. Thanks. I'm not sure whether the rest of GW members find this interesting or not. Perhaps as it is not about an area that they know, they may not be. PS At least you know i wasn't copying too much when I used words like "mouth". ha ha. |
Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 30th November 2007 |
Hi Josie, how could anyone not find Yorkshire interesting? I remember a book I read as a child - a group of children following the Thames from its source to London. Loved it at the time. Don't remember the title. Also, there's a photographer in Bolton who has photographed the journey of the Croal from wherever it starts into Manchester. The best and most intreguing pictures are the ones that show the river passing under Bolton town centre. Liked this - I'd consider getting rid of 'I' and 'we.' They somehow interupt the flow of the piece. You don't seem to be writing about a personal engagement with the place and experiences you've had - rather the place itself. Using I and we stop the reader seeing it through their own eyes. Just a very minor thing. I'll look out for more. Phil |
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