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By Fledermaus
30 November 2007
I tried to leave the poetry section alone for a while, but wt's piece asked for a reaction ;) Christianity was very 'good' at over-reacting too...
The strangest thing about the crusades is that when the Crusaders reached Jerusalem, it was already back in the hands of the tolerant Egyptians, who were in fact enemies of the same people the Byzantines and the Crusaders wanted to fight. Sadly enough though, the Crusaders didn't care.

One thousand ninety and six

Rumors reach the Evenland

Churches destroyed, monks were killed

Holy land desecrated

A false prophet’s followers

Yes, the end of days was near

The beast had risen from hell

Hundreds of thousands then marched

The cross raised in front of them

The pope had declared a war

He had the mandate of God

Four years they marched on and on

The lands behind them were scorched

A trail of blood through Europe

Then at last they reached the place

The holy Jerusalem!

Their blue eyes with tears were filled

Before they came down on it

Entered mosques and synagogues

Where Friday prayers ended

And washed the town’s streets with blood

 

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Written by maipenrai (780 comments posted) 30th November 2007
a good write Fledermaus

Written by stevetroster (1398 comments posted) 30th November 2007
Yes, maus, a quality piece that far exceeds the work that inspired it. 
 
All the best, 
Steve.

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 30th November 2007
Thanks guys. 
See. Christianity is not so much more moral than any other religion...

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3136 comments posted) 30th November 2007
I can't really better Steve's comment but as I don't have that gift for brevity I'll add that is was a very restrained piece considering the psychotic butchery that was involved. 
 
The crusades ,the pogroms, the Spanish Inquistion, don't you just love Christianity? 
Wasn't there a children's crusade where little kids went to the Holy Land to fight?  
Anyway a excellent piece of work stating it all very clearly and honestly 
Jane

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 30th November 2007
Thanks BBS, 
And since you mention those, not to forget the most brutal and destructive war ever to have been fought in Europe: The 30 years' war (1618-1648) between Catholics and Protestants... A lot of bloodshed for such a 'peaceful' religion. 
But then, one only has to open the book of Revelations to see that the Christian God seems to have different opinions about death and destruction than most priests claim he has...  
 

Written by Phil (6387 comments posted) 30th November 2007
I guess they're all as bad as each other when followed by fanatical idiots. 
 
God, save us from religion. 
 
Phil

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 1st December 2007
Thanks Phil. 
Indeed...

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