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Search for Serenity (1)

By maipenrai

30 November 2007

a bit of fun.

I felt peaceful and serene
as I gazed across the desert
at the setting sun,
for years, many years
I had searched for some
kind of serenity
seemingly in vain until
I had found this place.

I felt at peace,
Happy
with myself and nature,
THEN I SAW IT!!!
being gently blown by the desert wind
a crisp packet!
and I knew, oh yes I knew
that Bloody Linnekar
had followed me again.

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Written by stevetroster (1555 comments posted) 30th November 2007

British holiday makers, they're the same the world over!!

Good one, Bernie. Crisp and light and no-one in-salted!!

Steve

Written by Fledermaus (3321 comments posted) 30th November 2007

Yes... A pity people polute even the most beautiful places.

Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 30th November 2007

Very funny, I like it. I am constantly irritated by litter bugs and what makes me cross is mothers walking alongside their children as they drop their litter and not even battering an eyelid. :upset

I think we need a little light relief on the poetry section.

Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 30th November 2007

What am I like " battering an eyelid" :roll

thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 30th November 2007

Thanks All for your comments.

A little bit of fun is ok ?right?

Written by hutmaster (134 comments posted) 8th December 2007

A little bit of fun is OK - RIGHT!
This has the quality of a really well told story, maipenrai. The lead up sets the trap and this gullible reader fell right in - and laughed.
A not inconsiderable skill at work here.
A moral and a laugh. As I say - skill.
Well done.

hm

Thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 10th December 2007

thanks hm.
bernie

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