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Today's Not The Day
By FunkStuff
01 December 2007
Just something I came up with while trying to strip back my work to the bare essentials. Hope you enjoy!

/Rory


The banner lays unopened. The tiny clothes untouched. The cake uncut. Only one will be coming home today.

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Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 1st December 2007
Has this been posted before? It seems very familiar. 
 
Not a fan of the really short stuff - but this does cut to the essence of your story. 
 
Phil.

Written by FunkStuff (1 comments posted) 4th December 2007
I posted over in the 100 Word Fiction section of the forum, but I believe it was you who suggested I post in here.  
 
Sorry if the double post causes any grief. 
 
/Rory

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