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| By Matthiasrising | ||
| 01 December 2007 | ||
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I'm trying to move past the whole angsty technique I've found recently. Maybe this won't show that. Concerned for nothing And searching for Someone else’s answer. This is not my own. I’m pulling the reigns Out of the sockets, And drowning this dead horse, I’ve stomped entirely flat. What are we when isolated? Torn and visible: We are wanting; We are waiting to go through. I begin to dig my grave In this thrilling medium. Can’t this pen go faster? I want deeper lines! I’m chewing my wits end, Forming my catatonic stupor, Completing this fatal distraction. What are we isolated? Torn and visible: We are wanting; We are waiting to pass through This invisible barrier Inside our head. Pushing through Shoving past the crowd Pushing through Cutting into my soul.
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