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Natural fabrics
By andybyers
01 December 2007
Knitting needle erection
Womb a basket of wool
They knit a birthday suit together
For a friend they didn't know yet

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Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 1st December 2007
I'll dare comment on this - as I'm 'with it.' 
 
Liked the idea and the brevity. The knitting needle erection, I found a little disturbing! 
 
Phil.

Written by andybyers (171 comments posted) 2nd December 2007
Thanks, Phil... the knitting needle idea isn't elegant, I know, but it occurred to me and it felt honest and an interesting analogy, so I went with it. It's pretty different from most stuff I do... but in an odd way, in keeping, too.

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