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| By ellipinnock | ||||||||||||||||
| 04 December 2007 | ||||||||||||||||
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This is very much a work in progress, it's gone through at least 8 drafts and still isn't finished. Reactions of any kind would be really good even if they're just gut feelings. He: effervesces over lunch and latte. Orchestrating his Punch and Judy show. Edges. Angles. Planes of light scattering from skin as concave as the teaspoon he waves in her face. Condiments cannot capture the 'vivacity' of the brittle clothes racks marching across his mind. Neon cherry lips pouting out from monochrome prints. Living. Sculpture. Performance. Art. She: a winter afternoon audience of one. Eyes vacant, muzzled by dreams of sheep: indigo- dyed and woolen- witted. A parade of lollipops, blurring kaleidoscope sharp. Trademark head twists, hip flicks, haughty stares cloned onto toast rack ribs. Stomach burning, she teeters under the weight of cocoons. Cracking. One by one. She is retching up butter- flies. Flooding her lungs. Writhing wings that squirm towards her lips. Fingers fluttering, she chokes back gossamer words, flinching from the mirror- shattering emptiness sucking at her out of his iris- swallowing pupils. Eyes that are already lacing her into silk corsetry. Tight wrenched. She signs his contract sightlessly. Designer denim ink. Stands. Angular. Canvas- skinned. Stretched so taut over easel bones. Rubbing at indigo stains blushing her skin. Overexposed.
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