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life time travels
By mrsdecember29
06 December 2007

            lifetime travels
                 by:mrsdecember29

somtimes you dont realize that your life takes over your body. when you die you will have one life with god in heaven.only one person nows these things. we will never know untill we die.live,hope love,faith.


when we come to our sences we will realize that there is only one you only one of a kind.when you do so it brings out the inner you with the love of god it makes us happy to know that we are loved and that we can love.live,hope love faith.

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Written by gutterkitty (362 comments posted) 6th December 2007
This just reads like preaching to me. Feel free to express your faith, but put a bit more effort into it- for example, "senses", not "sences".

Written by audrie (451 comments posted) 6th December 2007
Well, this is a debateable point, some people believe we have a lot more than one life!  
To each his own.

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