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| Gale is Dead | |
| By audrie | ||||||||||||||||
| 06 December 2007 | ||||||||||||||||
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This was a poem I wrote back in 1973 (before you were all born!) It was after seeing a documentary, Gale is Dead, on the BBC about a young girl, Gabrielle, who was known as Gale. She was a beautiful child but when she was a young teenager, she took her own life. The verses tell the story. I wrote it as a song and the last verse was the bridge. I think it is really not needed, agreed? I fished this out after reading Hutmaster's poem of the boy locked in a chicken coop. The terrible things the human race does to children! What made you do it, Gabrielle Did you think nobody cared Was the sadness in your soul Just too much for you to bear? When abandoned as a baby Did you little mind receive Thoughts and feelings of rejection Filling you with heart's unease? Pushed around from Home to Home Fostered out both here and there Always searching for the love You're own true mother did not bear. Everyone was much too busy Passed you on from place to place Could not see the dark despair Behind the blank and guarded face. What made you choose that night to run Out into the driving rain Drawn towards the raging river Heart and mind so full of pain. What made you do it, Gabrielle, Could this be the reason That in the springtime of your life Love...yes Love... was out of Season? Gabrielle, Gabrielle, We should have known you were so blue Gabrielle, gabrielle, We must all share the blame for you.
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