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Crimson
By andybyers
07 December 2007
Primarily, it's about the United Empire Loyalists who left the newly-minted United States and founded Ontario in the 1780s (Ontario's motto is "Ut Incepit Fidelis Sic Permanet", usually translated as "Loyal she began, loyal she remains").  But interestingly, "Crimson" was also the codename for Canada in the 1920s US invasion plan for the British Empire called War Plan Red (the UK was "Red", India "Ruby", Australia "Scarlet" and New Zealand "Garnett").

Flag of Ontario


Crimson in defeat, they halted
Gathered lives and legacies in
    war-weathered hands and
pulled

Uprooted centuries where their names
    were braided in the soil

Behind them the rattlesnake enjoined,
    driving them on
    across valley and stream,
    across mountains and seas
    to another shore
where,

Crimson
at home
    they began again

Crimson
at home
    they remained.

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Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 7th December 2007
Wow. Didn't know the US actually had an invasion plan for the British Empire. Didn't they realize one quarter of the world-map was red? Still makes me wonder what Canada's position nowadays is. They're still a dominion, so basically not much changed since the later days of the empire, or did there? They nowadays have different colours on the world map... 
Yes USA, there is a kingdom to the north of you! :P

Written by andybyers (171 comments posted) 7th December 2007
Our position now? We're in NATO and NORAD. :) But actually, no, constitutionally not much has changed about Canada since then, aside from patriating the British North America Act and enshrining the Charter of Rights and Freedoms. As you pointed out, we're still a Commonwealth Realm, one of sixteen in the world.

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