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| THE CUCKOO'S TALE (SCREENPLAY) PART 1 **revised** | |
| By Zarker | ||||
| 07 December 2007 | ||||
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THE CUCKOO'S TALE (What would you do for love, when it stops being profitable) FADE IN: EXT. PHOENIX USA - NIGHT SUPERimpose: "2086 AD" Moonlight shimmers over the city. EXT. FOOTBALL STADIUM GROUND
The field is full of jubilant people throwing books onto INT. MOBILE COMMS CENTRE - CONTINUOUS
This small enclosure is lit with the faint glow of exotic
He listens enraptured to the voice of AEU, which is mellow
AEU (V.O.) Listener types rapidly as he talks.
LISTENER
HARSH VOICE (V.O.) EXT. STADIUM VIP EXIT - CONTINUOUS
JP walks out through the doors to applause of high-ranking INT. MOBILE COMMS CENTRE - CONTINUOUS
HARSH VOICE (V.O.) Listener types rapidly.
LISTENER
He hits the transmit key, then starts talking. His voice
LISTENER EXT. STADIUM VIP EXIT - CONTINUOUS JP stops to thump an applauder's upper arm.
JP
JP is jumpy, and is startled badly as firecrackers going off EXT. STADIUM CAR PARK - CONTINUOUS
Four assassins hardly to be seen creep through the shadows
The assassins pause as they approach an open space, checking The leader indicates, and they make a combined dash.
As they break cover there is a flash from nearby, and they
A security guard emerges from the shadows and approaches the He talks into a lapel pinned radio.
GUARD
HARSH VOICE (V.O.) Guard squints as he counts.
GUARD
HARSH VOICE (V.O.) EXT. STADIUM VIP CARPARK - CONTINUOUS
JP approaches his limo with his five attractive wives JP gets in the back with irritaton.
JP
His other wives look daggers at her as they all join JP and INT. LIMO
PHYSICIAN
JP holds a surgeon-gloved hand up to silence him, and
JP
HARSH VOICE (V.O.) INT. COMPUTER NETWORK SIMULATION - CONTINUOUS
Listener watches his screen as it simulates the status of a
In the centre is a multi-coloured object like an organic
Suddenly the long extending tube closes, and the virus INT. LIMO
HARSH VOICE (V.O.)
JP
Misty looks thoughtfully at JP as he slumps back furiously, JP sees his physician looking curious at him.
JP Physician shakes his head.
PHYSICIAN
JP
Misty sighs ironically as she tries to lose herself in her
PHYSICIAN
JP
Deflated, JP's physician exits, slipping JP a pill. Chamber JP activates the intecom for the chauffeur.
JP
JP JP closes his eyes, frowning. EXT. LARGE PRIVATE JET - NIGHT Flies through a clear starry sky. INT. BUSINESS COMPARTMENT
JP shuts and locks the door, then sits at a desk activating a
JP
COMPUTER JP drums his fingers and looks at the ceiling.
COMPUTER
JP Three people appear in hologram.
FRANCOIS
JP
IVAN
JP
CHI
IVAN
JP
CHI
JP
CHI JP's attempted response is interrupted
FRANCOIS
JP The three hologram images become fuzzy.
IVAN
JP He is interrupted by an alarm and the computer's voice.
COMPUTER (V.O.)
The computer's voice becomes garbled then stops as all the INT. PASSENGER CABIN - CONTINUOUS
Bathed in red emergency lighting and piercing alarm. The JP's four barbie dolls panic and begin screaming. Misty holds a book with her white knuckles.
MISTY She kisses it passionately. INT. BUSINESS COMPARTMENT
JP is sat bolt upright in his chair with his arms stiff in
Suddenly, everything changes again. Standard lighting flicks
JP takes deep breaths as he recovers a little more slowly The intercom buzzes as he his AIDE reports.
AIDE (V.O.)
JP takes a moment to react to the voice, then slowly reaches
JP
AIDE (V.O.)
JP
AIDE (V.O.) JP brushes a hair back.
JP
AIDE (V.O.)
JP
AIDE (V.O.)
JP
AIDE (V.O.)
JP
AIDE (V.O.)
JP
PETERS (V.O.)
JP
INTERCOM (V.O.) INT. PASSENGER CABIN - CONTINUOUS
CAPTAIN
The Barbies are talking excitedly and complaining to each Misty smiles at her book, then kisses it again.
MISTY
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