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MORNING-DREAM
By babyJ
08 December 2007


From clumps of tiny blossoms strike out

lilac and honeysuckle thieves

across dew-soaked grass, wafting upward

through her kitchen window


Ancient eyes tip-toe cross memory’s

little fingers and rosy cheeks

picking dandelion-roses leaving

tiny footprints upon her journeys trail.


Morning sunlight crawls across the kitchen table,

as she clears her family’s breakfast dishes,

warming her vase of failing flowers of days

that only God may erase.

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Lovely
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 15th December 2007
I love the imagery you have in this beautifully written poem. "lilac and honeysuckle thieves" - lovely imagery. the honeysuckle in particular steals itw way across our wall in summer and the scent is wonderful. The idea of the morning sunlight crawling across the kitchen table is good too. It crawls across my kitchen in the morning too, but this morning is quite different - black images of treeless trees etched on the grey sky of a cold winter's morning. The sun may yet come though over the hills later.

Written by dandysocpic (5 comments posted) 12th May 2008
this beautiful 
soft. sentimental and innocent. 
 
the imagery lulls me; 
quite something.

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