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sip
By punchy
09 December 2007


It drains away so quickly
 often passing without notice
  it can run through our fingers
   yet seems uncatchable

      uncontrolable
                             unpredictable

we take it for granted
 we forget it is our essence
 without it we are no more

 Go ahead, bathe in it
sip it and taste its purity
Revel in it, enjoy it

 just don't waste it

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Water?
Written by Josie (2780 comments posted) 9th December 2007
So true Punch! It plays a very large part in everyone's life and we wouldn't be here without it. Well put.
water?
Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 10th December 2007
I wrote this to go alongside an image I have entered in to a digital photography comp. I wrote it refering to life but with an image of running water so can be taken either way.

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